Individual Script Feedback
Below is the first draft of my script. I have added comments about the script with additional comments from Mrs Shipp, Becky Knapp, and my class mates. the idea of this is to see what I have not done and what I can improve on and how I can add the new ideas/improvements to the second draft of the script.
FIRST DRAFT
This is the first draft of my script. As you can see it lacks in detail as I made the mistake of assuming my team would know the script and therefore it would be adequate. Well I was very wrong as i later discovered as my script was liked by pretty much everyone but they did not fully understand the narrative as it was not clear.
SECOND DRAFT
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